Appearance for Tori? And a sister?

Writers' Corner
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I’m writing a short story and struggling for an appearance for my antagonist, named [name_f]Tori[/name_f].
She believes in what she does, and she’s not just the evil antagonist for the sake of the story, no, she believes that there is nothing wrong with her doings. [name_f]Tori[/name_f] is strong and guarded and pretends that nothing worries her (which isn’t really much anyway) but will break down when it comes to a decision revolving around her family. Any appearance suggestions?

[name_f]Tori[/name_f] has a twin sister, who I’ve have not discovered a prefect name for yet (previous ideas included [name_m]Clarke[/name_m] and [name_f]Clary[/name_f]). She and her twin look exactly alike, except for one aspect, which will either be their hair or their eyes.

Any help would be appreciated, even if it’s not much. [name_f]TIA[/name_f]!!

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You’ve considered [name_m]Clarke[/name_m] and [name_f]Clary[/name_f], so [name_f]Claire[/name_f] seems the logical choice for me. [name_f]Clarice[/name_f]? [name_f]Caris[/name_f]?

[name_f]Tori[/name_f] sounds like someone with dark hair. So I’d say [name_f]Tori[/name_f] has dark brown, curly hair, her sister has light brown/blonde hair. If they’re supposed to be identical, you could give [name_f]Tori[/name_f] short hair and her sister long.

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To me, [name_f]Tori[/name_f] sounds like she has short (maybe a bit below the ears), blonde, wavy hair. She has colored extensions and dyes her hair every now and then for a change. She’s tall for a girl and muscular too. You could maybe give her two different colored eyes (yes i know it’s rare) and her twin could just have normal brown or blue eyes.

As for the twin name, here are some suggestions:

Names that begin with C:
[name_f]Cailey[/name_f]
[name_f]Callie[/name_f]
[name_f]Clara[/name_f]
[name_f]Claira[/name_f]
[name_f]Ciara[/name_f]

Names that don’t begin with C:

[name_u]Devin[/name_u]
[name_u]Sam[/name_u] ([name_f]Samantha[/name_f])
[name_u]Kendall[/name_u]
[name_u]Sky[/name_u]
[name_u]Brook[/name_u]

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[FONT=Verdana]In my head, [name_f]Tori[/name_f] has long, silky black hair; gray eyes (or grayish brown); she’s tall, and I imagine her [name_f]Asian[/name_f]. Maybe her sister can be shorter and/or have short hair? Or maybe she dyed her hair brown like some Asians do? Wish you the best of luck! ^ ^[/FONT]

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Thank you!

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Any other suggestions?

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[name_f]Tori[/name_f] has long dark hair in my head. dark eyes, pale skin. delicate-looking but deceptively strong.

for her sister:
[name_f]Avril[/name_f]
[name_f]Cora[/name_f]
[name_u]Ruby[/name_u]
[name_u]Wren[/name_u]

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I think [name_f]Tori[/name_f] would be tall, she would have black hair, blue or green eyes. Her sister could be named [name_f]Kali[/name_f] or [name_f]Kara[/name_f] or maybe, if we want to go by your previous ideas and stuff like them, [name_f]Clari[/name_f]/[name_f]Clary[/name_f]. I think maybe for the difference either you could have the twin have dark brown hair instead of black, or her eyes could be whichever blue or green [name_f]Tori[/name_f]'s aren’t.