Determined

Im determined to write a story this summer. I want your opinion on some of the names and descriptions I have for the characters? Thanks!!!

Male Ideas: (fn/ln)
[name_m]Cillian[/name_m] [name_u]Yale[/name_u] : Shoulder-length brown hair and blue eyes :: White
[name_u]Reid[/name_u] [name_u]Dylan[/name_u] : Short light brown hair and blue eyes :: [name_m]Tan[/name_m]
[name_u]Darcy[/name_u] [name_u]Blair[/name_u] : [name_u]Jet[/name_u] black hair and brown eyes :: Pale
[name_m]Malachi[/name_m] [name_m]Roman[/name_m] : [name_m]Light[/name_m] brown ringlet hair and brown eyes :: Mixed (white and black)
[name_u]Bellamy[/name_u] [name_m]Atticus[/name_m] : [name_m]Black[/name_m] hair and peircing blue eyes :: Pale
[name_u]Amari[/name_u] [name_u]James[/name_u] : [name_m]Black[/name_m] hair and brown eyes :: African

Female Ideas: (fn/ln)
[name_f]Hazel[/name_f] [name_m]Kristoff[/name_m] : long, black hair and dark brown eyes :: [name_f]Olive[/name_f]
[name_f]Matilda[/name_f] [name_u]Rynn[/name_u] “[name_f]Tillie[/name_f]” : short light brown hair and green eyes :: Pale
[name_u]London[/name_u] Slayer : half head shaved/dark brown hair and blue eyes :: White
[name_f]Lacey[/name_f] [name_m]Tobias[/name_m] : curly dirty blonde hair and blue eyes:: White
[name_f]Jocelyn[/name_f] Ezekiels : shoulder length dark brown hair and brown eyes :: Mixed (italian and white)
[name_f]Georgia[/name_f] [name_m]Callum[/name_m] “[name_u]Georgie[/name_u]” : pin straight blonde hair and blue eyes :: White

I love the names! And also the descriptions match the names perfectly.
Except I don’t think [name_u]Bellamy[/name_u] suits the character. [name_u]Bellamy[/name_u] sounds to soft for his description. I think something sharper would suit him more. What about:

  • [name_u]Spencer[/name_u] nn [name_u]Spence[/name_u]
  • [name_m]Crispin[/name_m]
  • [name_m]Jedidiah[/name_m] nn [name_m]Jed[/name_m]
  • [name_m]Lars[/name_m]
  • [name_m]Finnegan[/name_m] nn [name_u]Finn[/name_u]

Please remember that you know the character way better than I do so please don’t see [name_u]Bellamy[/name_u] as no option.

[name_f]Hope[/name_f] this helps!

Thanks! (: And just getting a feel. I need characters before I have a plot and everything. Its crazy. I probably wont even use all the names.