Does this sibset sound ok?

Writers' Corner
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Mum: [name]Amanda[/name] [name]Roberts[/name]
Dad: [name]Marcus[/name] [name]Roberts[/name]

Oldest [name]Son[/name]: [name]Ruben[/name] [name]Roberts[/name]
Daughter: [name]Tamsin[/name] [name]Roberts[/name]
Middle [name]Son[/name]: [name]Theo[/name] [name]Roberts[/name]
Youngest [name]Son[/name]: [name]Joshua[/name] [name]Roberts[/name]

thnx guys, I have changed the spelling but if you have any suggestion for a different name for the narrator prefrerably beginning with t or a different surname that would be great

Thanks nameberries

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I think [name]Ruben[/name], [name]Theo[/name] and [name]Joshua[/name] sound great together, could definitely picture them on brothers. However, [name]Tamsinne[/name] feels out of place, due to style and spelling. I can’t see parents who would name their kids [name]Ruben[/name], [name]Theo[/name] and [name]Joshua[/name] choosing something like [name]Tamsinne[/name] for their daughter.

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Yeah, I agree, [name]Tamsinne[/name] feels out of place compared to the boys. I think even simplifying the spelling to [name]Tamsin[/name] would be enough, after all many parents have one style for boys and another for girls. I do like like [name]Ruben[/name] (prefer [name]Reuben[/name] spelling), [name]Theo[/name] and [name]Joshua[/name] as brothers though. Only other thing is that [name]Ruben[/name] [name]Roberts[/name] is a bit sing-songy repetitive in sound (R-b- R-b-) so maybe changing his name or the surname would be a good idea.

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The boys are great together, the girl makes no sense imo.

And if she’s a prominent character, her name just makes her seem extra-special in that annoying kind of way.

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This, although I know a sibset of [name]Ezra[/name], [name]Luke[/name], and Mckenzi so it’s possible, but in the literary world? Not so much.

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I agree with previous posters. I would recommend simplifying [name]Tamsinne[/name] to [name]Tamsin[/name]. I think it would be a small change that would make a big difference.

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I think Tasminne is out of place. [name]Ruben[/name], [name]Amy[/name], [name]Theo[/name], [name]Joshua[/name]?

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thnx guys, I have changed the spelling but if you have any suggestion for a different name for the narrator or a different surname that would be great