I am writing a novel called “Fear The House” I would also like some views from you about their current names and also new ideas if you think it needs to be changed.
Plot:
Sisters, [name_f]Callie[/name_f] and [name_f]Cindy[/name_f] are left home alone after their mother and father go on a business trip over the [name_u]Christmas[/name_u] holidays. [name_f]Callie[/name_f] notices her younger sister [name_f]Cindy[/name_f] is beginning to change and doesn’t seem to be her self. After [name_f]Callie[/name_f] gets concerned about [name_f]Cindy[/name_f] the two sisters start to notice there not alone in the house after all after a strange presence starts to take over the house and may wont to harm either [name_f]Callie[/name_f] or [name_f]Cindy[/name_f]. Also the two sisters notice Mrs [name_f]Mary[/name_f] [name_u]Harbor[/name_u] may not be so innocent and is nowhere in sight and they thinks it’s odd she is never around! Has she died?
Mill Family:
[name_m]Adam[/name_m] [name_u]Francis[/name_u] Mill (Father)
[name_f]Suzanne[/name_f] [name_f]Florence[/name_f] Mill (Mother)
[name_f]Clarissa[/name_f] [name_u]Leigh[/name_u] Mill (16 Year Old Daughter. Her nickname is [name_f]Callie[/name_f])
[name_f]Cynthia[/name_f] [name_f]Terese[/name_f] Mill (10 Year Old Daughter. Her nickname is [name_f]Cindy[/name_f]/[name_f]Cyndi[/name_f])
[name_f]Mary[/name_f] [name_f]Lynne[/name_f] [name_u]Harbor[/name_u] (Ghost)
[name_f]Margaret[/name_f] [name_f]Louise[/name_f] [name_u]Carter[/name_u] (Neighbor)
Character Personalities:
[name_f]Clarissa[/name_f] [name_u]Leigh[/name_u] Mill:
[name_f]Clarissa[/name_f] “[name_f]Callie[/name_f]” is sixteen years old and loves books and movies! She want’s to mess around and have fun but she knows she can’t when she has to act grown up and look after her younger sister. [name_f]Callie[/name_f]'s favorites books are The Famous Five and The [name_f]Secret[/name_f] [name_u]Seven[/name_u] and her favorite movie is The Goonies and Stand By Me. Her favorite colors are pink and purple she doesn’t really believe in the paranormal though. She has no friends at school they all label her as “The Book Geek” or “The Movie Geek” she longs for that special best friend who shares that same things she loves and can often be court day dreaming. [name_f]Callie[/name_f] has green/brown eyes and long dark brown/black hair (With a fringe).
[name_f]Cynthia[/name_f] [name_f]Terese[/name_f] Mill:
[name_f]Cynthia[/name_f] “[name_f]Cindy[/name_f]” is ten years old and loves music, movies and books! She looks up to her older sister and sees her as a role model. [name_f]Cindy[/name_f] has green eyes and medium to long brown hair and no fringe. Her favorite singer is [name_f]Cyndi[/name_f] Lauper and her favorite movie is also The Goonies. [name_f]Cindy[/name_f] has a few friends at school but not many. She misses her parents when they go away but loves being with her older sister! [name_f]Cindy[/name_f] does believe in the paranormal and sometimes gets scared easy.
Mrs [name_f]Mary[/name_f] [name_f]Lynne[/name_f] [name_u]Harbor[/name_u]:
[name_f]Mary[/name_f] is ghost and can’t cross over she has a bad temper and wants to course harm. Not much is mentioned at her life as a human being though. [name_f]Mary[/name_f] used to live in the same house as the Mill family before they moved in. And is called “Scary [name_f]Mary[/name_f]” by [name_f]Cindy[/name_f].
(I didn’t include information about the mother and father because they don’t play a major role in the book)!
What do you think?