Help with plot and names for The Prince and Someone Else

Hi! I’m back forever now! And I have a new story!!! (this probably surprises no one) Here’s a very in-depth and detailed post about it. Yes, I do actually need help, I’m not just pretending so I can tell you about my story.

The main characters I have right now are called The Prince and Someone Else, because they have no names yet. This is largely why I’m here. My basic plot is that there’s this prince and he’s living in the walls. Or maybe the floor. Yeah, I think he’s living in the floor. The Prince is also the crown prince and the only prince, which means that if he dies, the crown goes to this one nobleman who, believe it or not, wants the crown. The king has recently fallen gravely ill, which means that the nobleman has decided that it’s a great time to send assassins after The Prince. He escaped them out of sheer luck the first time, and hid in the labyrinthine secret passageways under the castle, but it’s only a matter of time before the assassins find him. There’s a passage directly under the kitchen garbage chute, so he knows where to find food, but he’s only been in there for a few days. Also, he’s worried about his dad, who’s a nice guy and a pretty good king. Meanwhile, Someone Else is the kid of some palace person, maybe a high-ranking servant or a minor noble. They find the secret passageways completely by accident and find The Prince even more by accident (which doesn’t really bode well for his hiding ability). However, at some point in between him finding the passages and Someone Else finding him, someone threw something dangerous down the garbage chute, and he’s very sick. This is a perfect opportunity for Someone Else to use their healing powers, which they’re pretty good at. That’s all I have. There will definitely be assassins involved later (not that they weren’t involved already). Also most likely political intrigue. But mostly it’s fantasy romance, because that’s practically my job.

Anyway, I need to name these characters, and I’d also like some help figuring out what exactly to do with them. I have no ideas, and the only requirement is that The Prince’s name not start with R. Preferably, Someone Else’s doesn’t start with S, but that’s not all that important. Here are a series of polls!

What should Someone Else’s gender be?

  • Male
  • Female
  • Non-binary
  • I know that gender is a spectrum and that these three options are by no means representational of it, they’re just all my still-not-quite-sure-what-gender-even-is brain can write at the moment. If you take issue with that, feel free to just select this option.
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How old should the main characters be?

  • Younger
  • 15
  • 16
  • 17
  • Older
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Should the king die at the end? If so, should he be killed by his illness, or should the nobleman get impatient?

  • He dies; it was the illness
  • He dies; it was the nobleman
  • He doesn’t die
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Who should Someone Else be the child of?

  • Favored servants
  • Minor nobles
  • Other
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Thank y’all so much! Sorry this is so long!

[name_m]Prince[/name_m] [name_m]Esben[/name_m]
[name_m]Prince[/name_m] [name_m]Viorel[/name_m]
[name_m]Prince[/name_m] [name_f]Abriel[/name_f]
[name_m]Prince[/name_m] [name_m]Dalziel[/name_m]
[name_m]Prince[/name_m] [name_m]Iarom[/name_m]
[name_m]Prince[/name_m] [name_m]Jolyon[/name_m]
[name_m]Prince[/name_m] [name_m]Orrin[/name_m]
[name_m]Prince[/name_m] [name_m]Asier[/name_m]

Ideas for Someone Else’s name:
[name_m]Amedee[/name_m]
[name_m]Henzo[/name_m]
[name_m]Valtteri[/name_m]
[name_m]Leodis[/name_m]
[name_m]Elion[/name_m]
[name_m]Fairfax[/name_m]
[name_m]Kelwin[/name_m]
[name_m]Quillon[/name_m]

[name_m]Tedrick[/name_m] for either.

Thank you both so much! [name_f]Elspeth[/name_f] and [name_m]Elion[/name_m] are my favorite Someone [name_f]Else[/name_f] suggestions (I still haven’t decided on their gender), and I love [name_m]Adrian[/name_m], [name_m]Esben[/name_m], and [name_m]Orrin[/name_m] for The [name_m]Prince[/name_m].

Update: Someone [name_f]Else[/name_f] is Elleth [name_f]Silva[/name_f], who is nonbinary and uses they/them pronouns, but they’re AFAB and don’t really mind she/her pronouns. They’re the child of minor nobles who have a manor in the capital city (and they can still find the passageways because they go underneath almost the whole capital city).

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Update update: There’s a cat! Actually, there are a lot of cats, who live underground in the passageways. The Prince has made friends with them, especially one of them, a blue and white adolescent, who he named Romi. Cats are very well-liked in this world, and they have the ability to sense magic, so I’ve decided that when Elleth ended up in the passageways, Romi sensed their healing magic and led them to The Prince. I realized that it makes no sense for them to have made all the right turns navigating the passageways and just so happened to find him. He was also not that sick, he just had food poisoning, which is miserable but not exactly life-threatening. Being a prince, he’d never had it before and was pretty sure he was dying, but he would have in all likelihood been fine.

Update update update: The Prince is likely going to be called Cyprian.

  • Yes!
  • Nope
  • I have other ideas!
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Sorry, I might be a little too obsessed with polls.

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Okay, it’s decided! Thank you all so much! (If anyone wants to help out with the plot, though, feel free to respond!)