Hey all you writer berries out there, I’ve been looking through some old stories I have and one has really caught my eye and I’m trying to get back into but the name of one of the characters just really isn’t working for me
the story is told from multiple points of view covering different parts of each characters point of view
This character is the eldest of four, born to his mother and father when they were teenagers, his grandfather (mother’s father) has always had a strained relationship with his daughter, her partner and subsequently his grandchildren but later in life wants to reconnect with his daughter and her family and tries to make up for his mistakes
Originally his name was [name]Aiden[/name] [name]Donovan[/name] (middle name in honour of his paternal grandfather) but [name]Aiden[/name] that just doesn’t feel right anymore, I want to keep [name]Donovan[/name] as the middle name though, I also want it to flow with his younger siblings name which are:
[name]Rhys[/name] [name]Sullivan[/name] (middle name after her paternal grandmother’s maiden name)
[name]Lucy[/name] [name]Jane[/name] [name]Delaney[/name]
[name]Esme[/name] [name]Faye[/name] [name]Taylor[/name] (not positive on [name]Taylor[/name] as [name]Esme[/name]'s second middle name so any alternatives would be helpful too, would need to have the same, surname or somewhat unisex name like [name]Donovan[/name], [name]Sullivan[/name] and [name]Delany[/name], I was considering [name]Sloane[/name], would that work better?)
so alternatives to [name]Aiden[/name] are needed please
& an opinion on [name]Taylor[/name] or [name]Sloane[/name] or alternative name in style for [name]Esme[/name]'s second middle name