What do you think of my cast so far (please be honest but respectful)
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Alioth [name_f]Jane[/name_f] Hannon [name_m]Al[/name_m]’ ee ith (POV, 13 yrs.) medium-long red-brown hair, pale skin, light blue eyes, she’s a bit nerdy and awkward, loves reading and alone time but also loves people and has strong morals
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[name_u]Rigel[/name_u] [name_u]Mason[/name_u] Hannon (POV’s brother, 14 yrs.) messy red-brown hair, medium skin, dark blue eyes, he’s a “cool kid” skateboarder but would choose his family over his popularity (though he would never admit it) nickname Foot but only Alioth calls him that ([name_u]Rigel[/name_u] means foot)
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Elisabelle [name_u]Carson[/name_u] (POV’s best friend, 13 yrs.) long black hair, dark skin, brown eyes, she’s sassy, fiery, but cares a lot and is a musical genius, nickname [name_f]Belle[/name_f]
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Corter _____ ([name_u]Rigel[/name_u]’s best friend, 14 yrs.) tan skin, blonde hair, bright green eyes, he’s rich, arrogant, and forgetful but tends to accidentally be a big help
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[name_u]Brennan[/name_u] [name_u]Gray[/name_u] (identical twin to [name_u]Elliott[/name_u], 13 yrs.) brown hair, medium skin, brown eyes, he’s very intelligent and kind, and will fight for what’s right alongside his brother
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[name_u]Elliott[/name_u] [name_u]Gray[/name_u] (identical twin to [name_u]Brennan[/name_u], 13 yrs.) brown hair, medium skin, brown eyes, he’s very intelligent and kind, and will fight for what’s right alongside his brother
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[name_f]Melody[/name_f] _____ (met halfway in story and joins for rest, 14 yrs.) short brown hair, tan skin, gray-blue eyes, she’s energetic and sweet and helps the group tremendously
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[name_m]Joseph[/name_m] Hannon ([name_u]Rigel[/name_u] & Alioth’s dad, [name_f]Audrey[/name_f]’s husband, early 40’s) messy red-brown hair, medium skin, light blue eyes, he’s an astronomer (hence the star names for kids), loves to read, and tends to not talk much
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[name_f]Audrey[/name_f] Hannon ([name_u]Rigel[/name_u] & Alioth’s mom, [name_m]Joseph[/name_m]’s wife, early 40’s) medium brown hair, pale skin, dark blue eyes, she’s kind but will talk your ear off, she works part-time at a pet store
Thanks for any responses!