how does this sound?

I have a character named [name]Everest[/name] [name]Hadley[/name] She’s a twenty- something drifter who dreams big. and doesn’t want anything to do with her roots. She leaves behind a commune hippy family. She’s artsy,studious, and wants more from her life. She finds herself in a small town in middle-of-nowhere Kansas. She falls for the local heart throb, [name]Luke[/name] [name]Monroe[/name]. She struggles where her hearts wants to take her and were her soul wants to stay.and the road is calling her name. He is everything she has dreamed of. Her modern day prince charming.

I like it! Does [name]Everest[/name] have a nickname? Might I suggest “[name]Evvie[/name]” if she doesn’t?
[name]Luke[/name] [name]Monroe[/name]=heartthrob. Yes. It’s definitely a heartthrob name.

[name]Evie[/name] is her nickname. what other characters do you see?