Is AUDREY MAY WINTER too much of an overkill on the month/season thing?

I didn’t notice it until someone pointed it out… [name]Do[/name] you think it’s too much?

Personally I didn’t notice at first either, so I don’t think it’s really that big of a problem. But maybe you could change the spelling of [name]May[/name] to [name]Mae[/name]?

I think it’s absolutely gorgeous. I didn’t notice it until you mentioned it. [name]May[/name], I think, is looked at more of as a classic name. Maybe you could spell it as [name]Mae[/name], that might help.

I agree, I think switching the spelling to [name]Mae[/name] is a good way to make it a little more subtle. But, if you hadn’t expressly pointed it out, I wouldn’t have given the combo too much thought. It’s far too lovely to think anything but “Why isn’t that MY name?” :3

~starophie~