Need a Title for My Newest Story

Hello! I am in need of a title for my newest story. I have a title at the moment but it is a filler title until I get a better one. The current title is ‘[name_m]Court[/name_m] of the Cadaver’, I do like this title but I’m not very in love with it. I know [name_m]Tim[/name_m] [name_m]Burton[/name_m] has done ‘The Corpse [name_f]Bride[/name_f]’ so I know I can’t use that title.

Here is the plot (it’s in many stages of editing at the moment) of the story. I don’t think it’ll ever become a book but I would hope that one day it does. The names in this story are possibly going to change but that’s a maybe.

Plot:
[name_f]Danna[/name_f] Proctorinn, a wealthy 40-something year old woman and her husband [name_u]Florian[/name_u] Proctorinn were both so excited to give away their teenage daughter, [name_f]Arianna[/name_f], to Geoffree who seemed to be a good man but when [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] fell in love with a woman whom wasn’t of the same social norms that the Proctorinn’s and Geoffree were; [name_f]Danna[/name_f] and [name_u]Florian[/name_u] forbad [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] from ever seeing [name_f]Claire[/name_f], forcing [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] to marry Geoffree. Though upon learning that Geoffree was a horrible man, [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] left Geoffree at the alter and ran away with [name_f]Claire[/name_f]. After running away, [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] was never heard of again. A few days later, [name_f]Danna[/name_f] and [name_u]Florian[/name_u] were devastated when they learned, from [name_f]Claire[/name_f], that [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] had been murdered. [name_f]Claire[/name_f] and [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] promised to meet up at a little cabin that was located in the town across the way from theirs but [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] never showed.

Fifteen years after Arianna’s murder, Arianna’s spirit started to haunt [name_f]Claire[/name_f] (along with her parents but not as much as Claire). [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] was and still is angry that no one went to search for her. Being that she was furious about this, [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] haunted [name_f]Claire[/name_f] as much as possible. These hauntings went on for months, [name_f]Claire[/name_f] told everyone that Arianna’s furious spirit was haunting her but a few months after no one believed [name_f]Claire[/name_f], her body was found in her home. No one knew why or how this happened, this was merely just a freak “accident” in [name_f]Danna[/name_f] and Florian’s words but the reason she died was Arianna’s angry spirit getting revenge on [name_f]Claire[/name_f]. Then [name_f]Claire[/name_f] joined [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] in the spirit realm and the two, despite [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] murdering her as revenge, did finally get to marry.

I know there are a few things that could be worked on… Okay a lot of things but it is in the editing stages. I need a title badly as that’s what usually gets my mind exploding with ideas. I would appreciate if anyone could give me titles or title ideas! Name suggestions and critiques/feedback would be appreciated as well! Thank you for the help!

~Nameless

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Arianna’s murder, Arianna’s love, Arianna’s haunting or Arianna’s spirit

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I love Arianna’s Haunting! I love them all so much. Thank you so much!

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Haunted by You? It might sound cheesy but it is catchy

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I like it honestly. It does seem cheesy but it’s cute so it works and I love it a lot

Was was [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] angry with [name_f]Claire[/name_f] in the first place?

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Well originally she was very in love with her but she’s angry because she was mudered and nobody (her parents, her town nor Claire) went searching to find her. Because it was only a few days after Arianna’s death that [name_f]Claire[/name_f] found out, somehow, that [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] had been murdered. So originally, no she wasn’t angry with [name_f]Claire[/name_f] but being that no one including [name_f]Claire[/name_f] didn’t care enough to go and search for [name_f]Arianna[/name_f] when she never showed to the cabin that her and [name_f]Claire[/name_f] were supposed to meet up at.

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