Hello, fellow writers!
I’m writing a story but I’m stuck in the namedepartment.
The outline of the story:
MC dropes everything when she hears that her sister is missing. She’s frustrated with the way the police is handling or rather not handling the case. She decides to take it upon herself to try to find her. The police is less than thrilled with MCs interference, they assign “the newbie” [name_m]Jonathan[/name_m] [name_u]Reese[/name_u] to keep an eye on her. Knee-deep in her sisters mysterious disappearence she uncovers a web of lies, which makes her question everything. She enlists the help from “newbie” as the intricate pattern of the situation begins to emerge.
These are the characters I need help with:
MC: At first I was pretty sure that her name would be [name_m]Halston[/name_m] “[name_f]Hallie[/name_f]” but I couldn’t find a suitable surname. Then I came across the name [name_u]Henley[/name_u], fell in love instantly!
[name_f]Dorothea[/name_f] [name_u]Henley[/name_u]
[name_u]Henley[/name_u] Duchannes
[name_u]Henley[/name_u] St. [name_u]Clair[/name_u]
or
[name_u]Logan[/name_u] [name_u]Henley[/name_u]
[name_u]Spencer[/name_u] [name_u]Henley[/name_u]
She will mostley be called [name_u]Henley[/name_u]. My dilemma is that last night I found another name that I also fell in love with, [name_m]Lundy[/name_m]. And it works perfectly with my GP!
[name_m]Lundy[/name_m] [name_u]Bray[/name_u]
Crime technician: [name_m]Miller[/name_m] (need a first name), he’s a brainiac, very smart. [name_u]Reese[/name_u] and [name_m]Miller[/name_m] are buddies.
[name_f]Sister[/name_f]: ??
Any input or other suggestions are very welcomed.
Thanks!
I personally like [name_u]Henley[/name_u] rather than [name_m]Lundy[/name_m], and I find that [name_u]Henley[/name_u] St-[name_f]Claire[/name_f] rolls off the tongue a bit better than the rest of the names. Sounds like an interesting story! [name_f]Hope[/name_f] all goes well!
Thank you for you input. Much appreciated.
I agree [name_u]Henley[/name_u] St. [name_u]Clair[/name_u] is my favourite of your options!
Crime technician: [name_m]Donovon[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_m]Arnold[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_m]Garth[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_m]Clark[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_m]Oswald[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_m]Lewis[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_m]Nelson[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_m]Ross[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_m]Rogan[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_m]Wesley[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_m]Cecil[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_u]Percy[/name_u] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_m]Felix[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_m]Jarvis[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m]. [name_m]Alfred[/name_m] [name_m]Miller[/name_m].
[name_f]Sister[/name_f]: [name_f]Tamsin[/name_f], [name_f]Chanel[/name_f], [name_u]Eloise[/name_u], [name_f]Freya[/name_f], [name_f]Jada[/name_f], [name_f]Amber[/name_f], [name_f]Coral[/name_f], [name_u]Hayden[/name_u], [name_u]Lennon[/name_u], [name_u]Sloane[/name_u], [name_f]Gwyneth[/name_f], [name_u]Milan[/name_u], [name_f]Azalea[/name_f], [name_u]Winter[/name_u], [name_u]Sutton[/name_u]
I really like [name_f]Dorothea[/name_f] [name_u]Henley[/name_u] (especially if she goes by her last name). Based off your description, I could see her being the type of person to roll her eyes whenever a relative calls her [name_f]Dorothea[/name_f], or whenever a co-worker calls her [name_f]Dorothea[/name_f] instead of [name_u]Henley[/name_u]. With that in mind, I could see her sister being…
[name_f]Lillian[/name_f]
[name_f]Rosa[/name_f]
[name_f]Constance[/name_f]
[name_f]Florence[/name_f]
[name_f]Martha[/name_f]
[name_f]Beatrice[/name_f]
[name_f]Cressida[/name_f]
[name_f]Adora[/name_f]
[name_f]Adoria[/name_f]
[name_f]Louise[/name_f]
[name_f]Henrietta[/name_f]
For [name_m]Miller[/name_m]…
[name_u]Reed[/name_u]
[name_m]Cedric[/name_m]
[name_m]Alexei[/name_m]
[name_m]Nolan[/name_m]
[name_m]Lucian[/name_m]