Should I kill off my main character?

Writing a book series and during it I thought killing the main character at the end of the second book would be a good idea. The book is written in third person making it possible without ruining the story.

Some pros and cons I thought up:

Pros
+Shows betrayal from a trusted character
+Causes one of the main villains to reform
+Brings a new major antagonist for the last book of the trilogy

Cons

  • Since it happens at the end of a book I feel readers might get mad and not want to read the next book because they liked that character
  • Since the person that kills them had been villainous at first, then good, then kills the protag, then in the next book regretful and the replacement for the protagonist. I feel it might make that character hated
  • A few other main characters die along with them, worrying people wont like the new characters I introduced

The pros pretty much are equal to the cons so I was wondering what people here thought.

You have to go with your gut. What are the characters telling you happened to them?
If the original main has to die for the story to continue, then so be it. And I think it shows that you’re not afraid of your readers; don’t let them bully you into writing something you don’t want to.
:slight_smile: Good luck

It just depends. It can be done well, but death as a plot twist can often come off as a cheap thrill.

Maybe consider:

  • [name_m]Will[/name_m] the readers already be attached to and care about the new character you plan to bring into the main character’s place? Are they sufficiently developed so that they can step into the spotlight easily?
  • [name_f]Do[/name_f] you plan to introduce more than one character that the readers need to become familiar with during the final installment of this story? That could turn a lot of readers off.
  • Is your major motivation for writing this death shock value, even if it causes the villain to reform?

Think of it like your favourite show during a later season. Sometimes actors quit and go to other projects, so a character you know and love leaves, but the producers try to introduce a new one to fill the void. It never really feels like the same show after that though.

I don’t know you, and I don’t know your writing, but right now I’m leaning toward don’t kill the MC. It sounds like there are other ways you can pull off your desired plot point.

I would also say it depends
I wouldnt kill the main character and several others and immediately introduce some new characters for the last book, it would kind of ruin the story for me
And it would be more dramatic if it was only the protagonist who died leaving their friends behind
But obviously you cant let us decide something important like this for you, in the end its all up to the author

If you only plan one having three books in the series total, I wouldn’t kill off the main character. Killing off the main character after the second book gives the third a very different feel, and will probably feel more like a companion pieces that the final book of a series.

When in doubt, I love to visit my favorite blogger for inspiration. Here are some links!

http://hannahheath-writer.blogspot.ca/2015/09/when-and-how-to-murder-your-darlings.html

http://hannahheath-writer.blogspot.ca/2016/02/10-ways-to-make-most-out-of-character.html

[name_f]Remember[/name_f], write what YOU want to write!

Here is my advice:
Kill them.

Your lot is saying thats the way the story works, all your cons are worrying about how people will react when they read it. That’s not how you should write your stories. Write YOUR story, trying to please everyone will make it not worth reading. <3

So write the story the way you see it play out. This sometimes dictates killing people you don’t want to, I remember in my novel, that I had to kill off my favourite character and I was heartbroken, I wanted to find any way around it. But that’s how the story goes.

Good luck! <3

You can do anything as long as you do it right.
For example, don’t introduce brand new characters in the third book. [name_m]Don[/name_m]'t ignore the death of the main character, but don’t completely base the book on it as well.

It seems you’ve already thought of why your character dies and how it impacts the other characters, which is good. Still, make sure the death itself isn’t bland. That just cuts everything else down.

In the end, no one can really tell you anything about your story. You gotta trust your gut.

Best of luck,

Hmmm, I know that for me personally, if I really liked that character, I probably wouldn’t read the third book after they died. Only if I didn’t like them or if I thought I could live without them would I read on. I’m not a fan of this killing the main character business, but that’s just my opinion.
Honestly, I think writers are using the whole Kill off the Main Character ploy way too often nowadays, and they use it instead of actually thinking of a creative plot twist. I just read this two-book series recently, and the first book was absolutely amazing. Then the second book… well, I think the author just got tired of it, and she wrapped the whole thing up in about three sentences (okay, it wasn’t that fast. But, let me put it this way, twenty pages before the end, I thought there was no way she could end the book without a cliffhanger). One of the things she did was kill off a main character, and I honestly think the only reason she did was so that the ending wasn’t completely fairytale-esque. I didn’t appreciate it, to say the least, especially since he was one of my favorites.
That being said, I agree with previous posters that you shouldn’t let your readers determine what you write. This is your story, not theirs. Everyone is going to have an issue with what you write. I know some people who are completely fine when main characters die. I just really easily get attached to people :stuck_out_tongue:
If you do go for it, make sure it’s not cliche. Make sure you’re not just killing them for the sake of killing them… make sure the reason is genuine and believable. Good luck!

There is a right way to kill off any character and a wrong way. You should never kill off any character for the purpose of shocking readers just for the sake of shocking them, or making them sad just because you want to make them sad. In your case, it seems that this character’s death would advance the ploy (which is a good reason for a character’s death.) However, considering this is your main character, you have to be a tad more careful. You have to keep some different things in mind.

First, do you have another character (or more characters) to fill the space of protagonist? [name_m]Will[/name_m] you main character’s death motivate them in some way? It appears that you are planning on having your protagonist’s killer take over, which I actually find really interesting. If you worry about their likability, make them likable! Real people have flaws, and maybe this character is just mislead. Have them redeem themselves in some way. Maybe give them an emotional scene where they really express severe regret (maybe have them visit the original protagonists grave site, or have them show their emotions. Have them cry)

[name_m]How[/name_m] did your protagonist’s death occur? Was it a moment of passion or uncontrollable anger, followed by immediate regret? Was it an accident? Was it accidental, but posed as purposeful (this could be a useful revelation, that your villain didn’t really mean to, but none of the characters or the reader know until much later) What drove your villain to be a villain again? [name_m]How[/name_m] are they feeling- right after, a little while after, a long time after? Regardless of the cause, this gives you an opportunity to milk some affection from the reader. If they are going to play the part of the new protagonist, it will be helpful to play with your reader’s sympathies.

Especially since you plan on having your villain eventually become the protagonist, you really need to make sure you come up with a backstory for them. In my opinion, you should do this anyway. It seems like this character is conflicted (seeing as though they are bad, then good, then bad but regretful). Why are they bad in the first place? Did they have a really tragic childhood (think Magneto from X-men, his childhood was horrific which played a part in his becoming a villain)? Did they have a decent childhood, but have something happen that sparked them to act impulsively? (Think [name_u]Loki[/name_u] from the [name_m]Thor[/name_m] movies) [name_f]Do[/name_f] they simply just hate your main character? (think about how [name_u]Loki[/name_u] was jealous of [name_m]Thor[/name_m] in the [name_m]Thor[/name_m] movies, or how Scar resented Mufasa in the [name_m]Lion[/name_m] [name_m]King[/name_m]) Think about what fuels them. Greed? Fear? Pain? Jealousy? [name_f]Every[/name_f] good villain has something. In my opinion, [name_f]Marvel[/name_f] does this amazingly. They generally have amazing villains.

Go ahead and kill that character, just make sure you don’t just blow them off. Kill them for a reason, have them killed for a reason (it doesn’t have to be a good reason. You villain could kill them because they are resentful of your protagonist and was having a bad day!), and handle it correctly. If you plan to make your villain a protagonist, you have to know them as well as your protagonist from the start.

In real short (lol), I think you should focus less on if you should kill this character, and more on how. Kill that character if you want to kill that character, because your readers will continue to read if you handle it well!

I wrote a novel, sorry, but I hope this helps! Good luck!

My first thought is no, because too often killing off a character is used for shock value. If the plot is fine without it wouldn’t. But if it really, truly adds to the main plot of your series, then you should go for it.

Three things:

  1. [name_m]Will[/name_m] the character be of more use to you dead or alive?

  2. Has the character reached their peak or a plateau, or do they have more growth/purpose left in them?

  3. [name_f]Do[/name_f] you give readers a nice transition so they get used to your new character(s) while still having the old ones?

Only you know the right answers. They’re always different :slight_smile: