Nightly Coffey (or Knightley) [female]
Keif ([name]Keifer[/name]) [name]Brown[/name] [[name]Male[/name]]
[name]Lorelei[/name] ([name]Lora[/name]) Bingley-[name]Brown[/name] [female]
[name]Charlotte[/name] Wydelle (called Wydelle) [female]
[name]Shamus[/name] ([name]Ham[/name]) Coffey [[name]Male[/name]]
[name]Juniper[/name] Coffey [female]
what do you think? they are listed in order of importance, main character to supporting characters.
I think the name Nightly/Knightley is interesting. I’ve never heard of it before as a first name. I don’t like, however, the surnames Coffey and [name]Brown[/name]. At least not together, as both are dark colours and it seems to be a bit odd. I love the name [name]Lorelei[/name] as it reminds me of a lullaby ([name]Tor[/name]-a-lor a-lora, tor-a-lor a-lei…) I also like the names Wydelle and [name]Shamus[/name], though I don’t like the nickname ‘[name]Ham[/name]’. I don’t think that [name]Juniper[/name] is a very realistic name for a child–Who would name their baby after a berry? Maybe if you posted the genre of the story then the names might make more sense.