I’m writing a story with some made-up names and I want to know your opinons about them.
Created LN: Mendenzelia (PN: men-den-zell-lee-uh) Changes to Mendez b/c they come to [name]America[/name] during the '20’s
Luvorick (PN: [name]Lou[/name]-vor-rick): He’s a sorceror in the story. Tall, dark, and handsome 
Lorlicia (PN: Laur-lee-cee-uh): His wife
Andrian [name]Warrick[/name] (PN: An-dree-in): one of their sons
I really like the last name and Luvorick and Lorlicia. I’ve never been brave enough to make up my own names, so I commend you for that 
I think that because you are going with names that are very different and unheard of (obviously, because you made them up) that Andrian is a safe and somewhat boring choice because it’s too close to [name]Adrian[/name]. I don’t mean this in a bad way, I just think that because the others are so interesting that this character may come off as less-interesting.
I love Luvorick! It sounds so pretty
The others are alright
They’re fantastic names. (I actually wish I came up with them first). However the wife and husband’s names are a little too similar. Still good but you should consider the likeness between the two names.