I made another topic asking what my character’s name should be. You can give full name suggestions here too. Also, in that other topic, there are some other details about this story, like some character personalities. Check it out if you want a tiny bit more context.
(MC=main character)
The MC can see ghosts, but dislikes her ability (very predictable, I know). During winter break, she is invited by an acquaintance to a party that takes place late at night.
At the party, her and her acquaintance realize there aren’t any girls there other than themselves. The two of them want to leave, but just as they wanted do, the boys there become aggressive.
They pin down the main character onto the ground, and using a book (origins of book will be elaborated on later), they try out some ritual, stabbing MC repeatedly. Acquaintace is forced to watch. A demon is summoned and possesses MC’s body. Demon kills one of the boys, causing the others to run in fear. The stab wounds on her body heal, but she’s never felt so awful.
MC’s condition is getting worse as the days go by. The acquaintance is trying to help, but doesn’t know what to do. MC switches between spiraling with mania and ceippling depression. Her body is unaware of how to handle the entity leeching off her soul.
Desperate, MC’s demon lures her into hell, with the acquaintance racing after her. After around two weeks in hell, a run in with the devil, and looking at the punishment systems, they go back to [name_f]Earth[/name_f], the demon still inside, feeling worse.
(Keep in mind this is VERY simplified. Many necessary details that would fill in plot holes are not here, but I feel like it would be difficult to explain here).
What do you think? Too cliche? Cheesy? [name_m]Just[/name_m] plain bad?
One last note: her ability to see ghosts doesnt seem relevant here, but is actually quite important to the story.