Which combo?

She is the protagonist, a sweet, sensitive, kind-hearted businesswoman. She’s extremely millionaire, but humble and low-profile. Kind of innocent and very intelligent. She has a long surname. This part of my novel is set in the future (my protagonist will be born in 2022).

I’ve been thinking about these combos:

  • [name_u]Clare[/name_u] [name_f]Lavinia[/name_f] (her current name)
  • [name_f]Lavinia[/name_f] [name_u]Clare[/name_u]

Her fraternal twin is [name_m]Julian[/name_m] [name_u]Reed[/name_u]. [name_u]Clare[/name_u]/[name_f]Lavinia[/name_f] lives in [name_m]New[/name_m] [name_m]York[/name_m].

Which one flows better in your opinion?

Thank you!

I like [name_u]Clare[/name_u] [name_f]Lavinia[/name_f]. I feel like [name_u]Clare[/name_u] matches better stylistically with brother [name_m]Julian[/name_m].

I think [name_u]Clare[/name_u] [name_f]Lavina[/name_f] could work, and maybe she could move to [name_m]New[/name_m] [name_m]York[/name_m] to be with her twin. If you don’t think [name_u]Clare[/name_u] would work, though, you could always do [name_f]Lavina[/name_f].

It’s [name_f]Lavinia[/name_f] :slight_smile:

Well, she lives in [name_m]New[/name_m] [name_m]York[/name_m] because her corporation is based there (it’s a real one, I have no creativity to invent companies :D)

Yep, [name_u]Clare[/name_u] [name_f]Lavinia[/name_f] is better. [name_u]Clare[/name_u] [name_f]Lavinia[/name_f] & [name_m]Julian[/name_m] [name_u]Reed[/name_u] :smiley:

oh, and I forgot that she lived in [name_m]New[/name_m] [name_m]York[/name_m] with her twin