Is the flow right? Or is it too off?
I think it’s good, but I’m not sure if that’s just my fondness for both names talking.
Is the flow right? Or is it too off?
I think it’s good, but I’m not sure if that’s just my fondness for both names talking.
Not bad, but the Ls kinda smoosh together.
I like it! I like it a lot, actually. I do agree that I trip over the "L"s, though. Usually it doesn’t bug me, but I struggled with it when I tried to say it out loud. 
ahaha, the l’s flowing together is actually why I kind of like it. It’s got a lilting sound to it. Lol.