My plot has a few holes in it…such as why the group that kidnaps two kids blackmailed the mayor. Any ideas?
Also names for the members of the group?
These are some of the other names in the book to give you idea of the style:
Here are their descriptions:
#1 : She is the leader of the group. [name_u]Bright[/name_u] sapphire blue eyes. She wears her light brown hair in two simple braids. She is very powerful and forceful. She has a quick temper and is harsh. She wears black pants and a black shirt with a hiking vest and shoes, also black. She wears a gray beanie.
#2: he is already named. [name_m]Desmond[/name_m] [name_m]Thomas[/name_m], a science teacher at the school the main characters attend.
#3: An [name_f]Asian[/name_f] woman with dark eyes and wavy black hair. [name_m]Sly[/name_m] and deceptive, disloyal but always gets everything done, no matter the price.
#4: Brother of #3. He has dark eys and black hair as well. He is very quiet and helpful, very easy to be used by evil people. He has a good soul though. He ends up confessing and turning himself an his group in to the police.